steel grey mist devours every drop of sunand rain dances in on the skirts of summer fogleaving droplets of dew behind, like jeweled gifts (revisions suggestion weaved in from my lovely friend Paula and my own)
steel grey mist devours every drop of sun
and rain dances in on the skirts of summer fog
leaving droplets of dew behind, like jeweled gifts
(revisions suggestion weaved in from my lovely friend Paula and my own)